Foolish Earth Creatures: First Draft Playtest
Attention, Earth creatures! I, Vorak the Master Brain, require experimental test subjects—I mean, playtesters—to refine my master plan for the conquest of Earth.
Right now I've written a first draft of roughly the first act of the game's story. I'm looking for overall impressions rather than small-scale criticisms or bug reports—what do you like/dislike about the game, whether it's clear or confusing, etc.
Playtesters will be credited in the final game (unless you'd rather not be).
EDIT: The playtest is now closed. Thank you to everyone who sent me feedback! If I run another playtest I'll make a new post about it on this blog.