Dear Student (1)
Hey kid, I'm sorry that I hurt your feeling by suggesting that your brag list of first prizes would not impress the Ivy League schools. Or that doing everything by yourself is not leadership. Or that the number of visually impaired people you have patronized is not something to boast about. I'm glad you found someone who would “cut the crap and just proofread what [you] have,” as you told me in the face; you desperately needed some help in that department, judging from your Engrish proficiency.